Getting to Gamma in Your Business Blog

Although retired from my 27-year long career as financial planner, I continue to attend meetings of the Financial Planning Association.  I’m devoting this week’s Say It For You blog posts to concepts discussed at the most recent FPA meeting that I think are worth the attention of us Indianapolis blog writers.

Gamma is the third letter of the Greek alphabet, but, when it comes to investing, the term “gamma” has a very special meaning. “When it comes to generating retirement income,“
say Paul Kaplan and David Blanchett of Morningstar Investment Management, investors spend the most time and effort on: 

  • Alpha – selecting the money manager or mutual fund
  • Beta – choosing an asset allocation (how much to allocate to stocks, how much to bonds, etc.)

However, the Morningstar authors point out, gamma can be far more important when it comes to retirement income.  Gamma, they say, “presents a way to quantify the additional value that can be achieved by an individual investor from making more intelligent financial planning decisions.”

“It is every marketer’s goal to get inside the head of a consumer,” says Alek Flekel of business2Community, because, of course, you want to figure out how to get consumers to purchase your product or service.

In the online reader’s buying decision, the “alpha” stage consists of the consumer having a need or want and searching for a way to satisfy it. In a way, readers who arrive at your business blog have already “drunk the the Kool-Aid”. They already have an interest in your topic and are ready to receive the information, the services, and the products you have to offer.

The beta “stage” consists of the reader investigating what you have to offer in the category in which they’re already interested. Do you, in fact, offer the type of product or service for which they were searching?  Is the price range within their reach and in accordance with their expectations? Do they get the impression that you have experience helping consumers just like them solve problems and satisfy needs?

Gamma goes well beyond alpha and beta. Since the goal for every marketer, as Flekel reminds us, is not to sell to many one-time customer but to build a community of repeating, lifetime customers, it’s crucial that readers get a sense of your “gamma” through your business blog.

Write from your passion! The big advantage of blogs is that they’re personal. The business owners’  or practitioner’s personality and character need to be revealed.  A blog must unmistakably demonstrate to online readers that, in this business or practice, they’ve found the “real deal” Gamma factor!

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Titles Creat Expectations in Business Blogs

Just as is true in newspapers, business blogs can contain different types of stories and different types of headlines, l explain in corporate blogging training sessions. I found examples of three different title types in Discover Magazine’s May issue.

One category, like newspaper headlines, simply conveys what content readers should expect to find in the article to follow:

  • Evolution – of Humans, of Tech
  • Valley Fever: The Hidden Epidemic
  • How I Took Down Sharpshooters in the Pacific

Such  very descriptive title types, while  not “cutesy” or particularly engaging, can be highly effective in business blogging because they: a) are short and to the point  b) use keyword phrases that match up well to what a readers may have typed into the search bar and
c) ensure that the content will “deliver on the promise”.

A second category of title that I saw in Discover arouses readers’ curiosity, but gives only the barest hint of the content to follow:

  • Cunning Fish Camo
    The article describes fish called “lookdowns” that are able to manipulate polarized light in order to confuse predators.
  • Supernova’s Shocking Second Act
    This heads an article about a stella nova, an astronomical phenomenon where radiation is being emitted from a stellar explosion that happened more than 450 years ago. Again, this title arouses curiosity, but gives just a hint of the article’s content.

The temptation, of course, in selecting a title for a business blog post, is to go for the “catchiest”-sounding word combination rather than the most descriptive. A compromise is to use a combination of a “Huh?” to get attention and then an “Oh!” subtitle to make clear what the post is actually going to be about.

I found several examples of a third category of title: the built in call to action – the blogger names the problem and implies that a solution is to be discussed in the blog post.

  •  Feed the World!
  • How to Be a Better  Negotiator

Call-to-Action titles in business blogs mobilize readers to do something and/or learn something.

Whichever type of title you choose for a blog post, remember that titles create expectations!

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News and Feature Posts – There’s Room for Both in a Business Blog

The Ivy Tech Community College textbook by the name of “Breaking Through College Reading” has some interesting things to say about how, in newspapers, news stories are treated differently from feature stories.

Like newspapers, business blogs can contain “news story” posts and “feature story” posts, and I thought the explanation given in the text could be useful for freelance blog content writers.

“Feature stories differ from news stories in their timeliness, style, and length,” textbook authors Brenda Smith and LeeAnn Morris explain. Whereas news stories cover breaking, time-sensitive matters, feature articles would have similar impact if you read them days or weeks later, Smith and Morris add.

Unlike the inverted pyramid style of news stories, (with facts presented in decreasing order of importance), the style of features is characterized by a beginning, middle, and end.

When it comes to blogging for business, not everyone likes the inverted pyramid concept, even when it comes to newsy blogs. Ginny Soskey of Hubspot quotes studies showing that participants who actively read content online read (or at least scan) 60-77% of a story.  “There should be valuable information presented again and again through the entire article, all the way to the call to action at the bottom,” Soskey asserts.

The point I think it’s important to stress to business owners, practitioners, or to freelance blog content writers is that varying the type of content in a business blog is a good idea. Readers need to know about any new products or services they can now obtain through you, about any new partners or employees, and about your recent activities in the community. You can also bring news about recent developments in your industry or profession.

Other (in fact most) of your blog posts, will be in the line of “feature stories”, offering helpful hints about ways to use products, questions consumers should ask, and your opinions on the best way to approach customer needs. Business blog posts need to include stories about how you solved client problems, and what lessons you’ve learned through your experiences, wisdom you’ll be applying in your dealings with them should they choose to become your customers. These feature stories are generally non-time-sensitive.

News and feature stories – there’s plenty of room for both in a business blog!

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The Biology of Baleens and Blog Post Titles

Leafing through an Ivy Tech Community College textbook by the name of “Breaking Through College Reading”, I noticed an exercise designed to teach students how to become better readers by differentiating among topics, main ideas, and supporting details. Since, as blog content writers, one big challenge we face is selecting the best title for each of our blog posts, I thought the exercise I found in the reading textbook would be very relevant. 

The lesson quotes the following passage from Biology, by Neil Campbell.

“Humpback whales strain their food from seawater.  Instead of teeth, these giants have an array of brush-like plates called baleen on each side of their upper jaw.  The baleen is used to sift food from the oceans.  To start feeding, a humpback whale opens its mouth, expands its throat, and takes a huge gulp of seawater.  When its mouth closes, the water squeezes out through spaces in the baleen, and a mass of food is trapped in the mouth.  The food is then swallowed whole, passing into the stomach, where digestion begins.  The humpback’s stomach can hold about half a ton of food at a time, and in a typical day the animal’s digestive system will process as much as 2 tons of krill and fish.”

Students are asked to label each of four possible titles for this passage as being either correct, too broad, or containing only a detail (versus a topic).

I invite my blog readers to take this “test” and to choose the best title for the Biology piece from among the following:

  1. Humpback Whales
  2. Baleen for Teeth
  3. The Digestive System of the Humpback Whale
  4. How Whales Filter Food

Now, before you label any of the four as your “final answer”, consider the following definitions offered in the textbook:

A topic is a word or phrase that describes a subject or a general category. “The main idea, in contrast, is a complete sentence that states the topic and adds the writer’s position or focus”. The supporting details are the specifics that develop the topic and the main idea.

In composing business blogs, we need to keep several goals in mind.  We want to write engaging titles, we want to include keyword phrases to help with search, we want to be short and to the point, and we want to use power words.  The overriding goal, though, in composing a title has to be making promises we are going to be able to keep in the body of the blog post itself.

Did you choose title #3, “The Digestive System of the Humpback Whale”? That’s the one that includes the writer’s focus in the paragraph.  #1 is too broad, #2 far too specific, and #4 limited to only a portion of the paragraph’s content.

There’s a “biology” to selecting effective business blog post titles!

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Why Your Business Blog Deserves Better (Titles, That Is)

This week I’m devoting my Say It For You blog posts to poor headline prevention tips collected from many different sources.  As Ginny Soskey of HubSpot so aptly put it, headlines are so crucial to our content’s success, we really need to stop messing them up.

Earlier this week, I discussed Bait-and-Switch, Over-Promise-and-Under-Deliver, and Stale-Conclusion headlines, all ways to disappoint and mislead online readers.

As a corporate blogging trainer, I loved Thomas Umstattd’s list of “Top 5 Blog Title Mistakes Authors Make”, with its very humorous and on-point examples.  One very good point Umstattd stresses is that descriptive titles are boring.  In school, he ways, your teacher probably taught you the purpose of a title was to describe your writing.  That’s wrong, he says.  The purpose of a title is to tell readers why they should bother to read your writing!

Umstattd says the title should describe not the content, but the value of the content!

     (Bad title: Baby boomers & Social Security Better title:  Why Baby Boomers Don’t Deserve Social Security)

When blog content writers try being too clever, too general, or too cliched, that’s not good, either, says Umstattd.

   ( Bad title: Who’s Your Daddy?   Better title: Is Satan Your Daddy?  Bad title: Shock and Awe   Better title: 5 Things That  Shocked Me Senseless)

“A good title makes all the difference in the world,” says Nolan Wilson of benchmarkemail.com.  In his list of tips for writing engaging blog post titles, Wilson includes:

  • Using keyword phrases
  • Being short and to the point
  • Using power words
  • Delivering on your headline promise in the body of the post

Does your business blog deserve better (titles, that is)?

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